This is deep! It was almost melancholy, in a way, which I really enjoyed, and at the same time, very peaceful, calm.
A suggestion I might give to you is to describe the sea more: the smells, the sounds, rather than just sights. Still, really well done.
Write on!
Your mossy friend,
Tardigrade
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