i really like this peice.... it really resembles how when you are growing up and your parents dont want yuo to be something. its moving but not everyone can relate to what you are trying to convey here. many people can. but many people cannot at the same time. get where im going with this? i think people will be more interested in things that they can understand easily because they know about it themselves. besides that. very good. plz keep writing. ~the n00b.
wow. theres not much i can say about something like that. it was powerful and moving. it was the apple to my pie, it was the straw to my berry. it was a great read so far and i hope you keep writing. i really enjoyed it so far. i liked the beginning, middle and end of it best (:
OMG! you are talented. i could reaaly feel they emotions in your work. and i luv anberline too... have you heard 'godspeed'? its amazing. anywayz. i hope you continue writing. i want to keep reading about the rest of 'your' adventure. im happy to give you a review. reward or not
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