This is a sweet poem. It feels like breathing a fresh air. You start beautifully with the lines " Yesterday a fairy was spotted scattering golden leaves into the air."
This is a good post about self-help. I appreciate it very much. Your words are so true and inspirational. I like the way you wrote these with points.
I like the lines “But I’m fed up with chopping through trees, with slicing and hacking away. There is no perfect route to take because the trees are everywhere.”
We have to find time today to spend with ourselves. So we will see positive results, and our soul will be happy.“
I really liked this Acrostic poem and the way you painted life. I like the title as well. Sometimes clouds and storm prevent us from shinning. It’s so wonderful to see sun shines again. Beautifully used colors and shapes, sounds, smells, and feelings to create the images in each line.
I like the lines "Shadows speak their cold, hard
Truth: Time for winter once again."
A very good poem with an unique concept... You have written a very good piece of poem about our universe, I liked the way you told the story. I like the title "Abstract Astrophysics". It fits with the words.
I really liked this "Pensacola" poem because of the way you painted life. I like the way you crafted your story. “Docks filled with fresh fish” “ Old men with nets” “slow motion waves” “Trees and lanes,” all the things blended together creates a lovely nature scene. I could imagine where you are.
I think you can add a photograph of Pensacola so that readers could visualize what you are conveying.
I really liked this poem and the way you crafted your words. It's so inspirational. I like the title as well. Yes, In life there are so many questions we don't know the answers. I like the lines "How do people use their hearts to help someone off the ground?"
I just read it from review request page.
The character is well developed. I like this paranormal story of The Traveling Man. Your descriptions are quite clear and easy for me to visualize your setting. I think you could add some events to make it more interesting. but it is up to you what will work for your story.
I think this story will be fit in the next chapters later on; as I just read a chapter of yours so some events are unclear to me.
This is really a good poem about childhood memories. The lines floats beautifully. The poet sharing her beautiful moments and treasured experiences. I enjoy your descriptions.
I like this poem about Today’s Child. The line breaks beautifully. The words are so true that keeps me reading it to the end. Like the lines "They are innocent too in this world
Of chat rooms and people unseen."
Happiness is something that comes from within. No one can make us happy as long as we are able to drive the negative thoughts. Like your write “Happiness is as simple as watching the sun rise or set over a body of water.”
This is really a good poem about mango. It floats beautifully. Its written from personal experience and images. I enjoy your descriptions and the point of view.
I like the story written with the prompt "Creature has secret admirer". Dialogues flowed beautifully. The imaginary of the picture brings life to this story. It's make the story more interesting. It has emotional connection; that makes the children read from beginning to the end.
This is wonderful story written with good points. I like the thoughts embedded in it. I like the line "Then, do not protect your positive, even saintly characters from negative emotions. A highly evolved character will know how to use an antidote to the negativity he or she is feeling, like using love against hatred."
Wonderful poem about a brilliant London-based detective, Holmes. Beautifully told and written and I can relate your story. The tones I find in this poem are rhythmic.
This is a good read. Written with the prompt "THE TV IS BROKEN" for the Flash Fiction. I think your write go with the prompt and you managed very well.
{/b} This is an interesting story. It is full of suspense’s.
I like the way how you wrote this story. Dialogues flowed beautifully between the character Jakoline and Lattan. I like the fonts as well.
There is no description of the events I found. Otherwise it's a good story.
A very good message with an unique concept.You have written a very good piece of poem from life experience. I liked the way you told the story with very clear descriptions and presentation. I like the emotions and the lines
"Sailing with the wind while cresting reckless waves before,
Churning through the white caps leaves you scurrying for more!"
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