Dear Timothy,
Thank you for sharing your process of reviewing items on this site.
Your explanations are very helpful and confirm largely what I have been thinking. But I feel validated now and will attempt to apply your suggestions.
This is the second story I read today and both treated the sense of alienation people can feel and offered a way to overcome it. I like the way this story is kind of generalised (the woman, a child, a ship on the horizon). It is well structured and the beginning loops into the end phase.
Dear Bubblegum Jones,
Thank you for sharing the account of your experiences on Writing.com and thank you for reviewing my work twice and both very positively!
You are a better record keeper. I am more intuitive in my explorations and do not keep a tally...yet.
I hope you will stay on this site and enjoy more creative writing from around the globe.
A good outcome of an event that could have become a tragedy. May you and Linda live a long and happy life, enjoying every minute of it! Thank you for sharing your experience!
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