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Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)



Hi Sofie Baekdal:

Life is what we make but it is not without its pitfalls. to love is a reason to face all

causes. When you are in love the heart cannnot skip a beat love is life's rythyum.

For I say very good..

Ice
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Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)



Hi Itchy Water:

Nice ideas we all need to come to ourselves.

Ice
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Review of A Good Life  Open in new Window.
Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)



Hi James:

I for one like your point of a reality and a matter of fact.

However, did you find it hard to use complete rythming words?

You made a need point.

Ice


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Review of Shadow of a Man  Open in new Window.
Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)

Hi RyFelts:

The way you phrase your thought is stunning and marvelous to say the least.
The command of words into thought can hold the of any soul.

May I say if your frames would have been more even that would be more of an attention holder, However even at that your ideas is the excellent point you indeed made.

In addition, may I say who is that man that I could not see? Therefore, I will read it again to find that man...

Now the man has to bee your shadow. You are at the point in life of making a decision that seem like failure after failure like so many mean do.

Well if I am off base your Writing is second to none.

Forgive errors please.

The Iceman
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Review of Shame  Open in new Window.
Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)

Hi BeHereBook:

You made some outstanding points.
The wit is second to none.

Ice
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Review of Who was Jesus?  Open in new Window.
Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)



Jesus, is The Christ, He is the Essence of the Symbol of the

Heavenly Father.

Jesus is The Pure Spirit Light of The Word.

The Word is The Truth Of The Light Of Love; He is Pure Truth/Spirit/Light Of

Mind Of Love for the darkness

Of this Planet Earth.

The Pure Spirit Light Of Mind Of Love (God)-Jesus, The Christ,-The Spirit, is the

same for the love of humanity as one body, The Human Family of The Pure Light.

Jesus, The Christ calls The Pure Spirit Light Of Mind Of Love Father because we

are an emanation of the image of The Pure Spirit Of Light.

Jesus, Begotten of the Pure Spirit (The Holy Spirit) and He is our Heavenly

Father. As believer we do not live to prove this nor defend this whereby we

believe this by faith.

Hence, Believers for this purpose by the guiding Pure Light of the Holy Spirit

Worship Jesus, The Word Of Truth.

Jesus is The Pure Spirit Light Of Mind Of Love whom we Praise in honor and

Glory,

The Pure Spirit Light Of Mind Of Love is/and Jesus, The Christ The One, and

only that who is worthy, to Worship!
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Review of Life  Open in new Window.
Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


Hi Trina Michelle:

I love what your ideas exspose. Everything spoken is ture. no matter the

structure, or the meter, either the prose i believe writing objective is the no matter

ones subjectivities.

Yes we all have the right to convey feeling... some say in correct dailogue with

strong and and weak transitional words. I think you made your point and oh how
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well.

Ice--- forgive errors.
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Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)


Hi Matthew Jaroszewski:

I like your perception of the awareness of space and the spark of light.

My thing is not an attack but where does that places humanity?

It seems to say we are here just thinking like we have no clue because of the

unknown or the invisiable. still nicly concieved.

Over look errors

Ice
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Review of for writing.com  Open in new Window.
Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)



Hi troy ulysses davis:

I like it because you speak my same sentiments...

I like the way you enter ancient times...

that made your piece more clearer...

Ice
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Review of Empty Tracks  Open in new Window.
Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)


Hi James A. Osteen Jr.:

You took me home. As a kid in Hooper City I would set om the hill of the Gulf couse

and watch the train pass to and forth...

You brought all that back.

Then it even felt like you lost a persom a real person and all you see is traces that

she left behind like her ear rings she didn't that you bought.

The only thing I regret where are those empty winding tracks in the mountain.

I guess the smokey hills of NC or Tenn or please say Kentcky...

A perfect Job and the stucture is awsome and that so easy for me.

Ice

Please over look the errors.
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Review of Books are Great  Open in new Window.
Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)


Hello ladygrace:

The things you write fantastic and more than...

That is a truism on the great cliches in time and space...

Book are more than a friend and a friend is closer than a brother...

Books are knowledge unto wisdom and you have just created wisdom...

So you are a friend, you have Knowledge and as the young folks say you are

spitting wisdom they call dat knowledge...

Ice

over lok the errors...
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Review of My angel  Open in new Window.
Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)




Hi dvdtomkins

Your poem sweet and easy I lke it.

What is a poem... Is a sonnet and a poem the same likewise prose...

Very good job...

Ice
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Review of To a girl..  Open in new Window.
Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)


Hi Natasha C. Harrington:

Natasha C. Harrington, that is very nice how you expressed a mother's love.

I realy loved it.

Ice
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Review of A Gift  Open in new Window.
Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)


Hi Ladygrace:

Nothing can be more truer, Ladygrace you hit the nail on the head...

All I could is sense, feel, and are motivated to do more love...

I wanted so much to give you five and I make do so...

Your line structure for me it has me thinking...

Not errors, not punctation, trust me i leave that to those maqster writers..

Your work is better that the best and this I do attest...

It is your line structure however that the best...

It is love, it is respect, it appreciation, it is like a sweet kiss, it is like the taste of

honey sweeter than the honey cone, it is like never ever being alone... that prose did

all that to me and far much more...

But I am Thinking did it give me design just thinking... Did it that is not a question...

Thank you for you...
Ice
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Review of IT LURKS  Open in new Window.
Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)


Hi SHERRIGIBSON~THNX ANONYMOUS

Well done

The breast is done

We need that to know that the devil is on his job

We need to be on ours in love and recieving and sharing grace

I love The and appreciate the Warning

Ice
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Review of Wanderous Soul  Open in new Window.
Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)


Hi MrCl3an:

I like your prose.

Your line do you think need to be more even it may have given more eye vision

of comprhension.

That has nothing to do with the point of yor prose. that just pitful me.

Whether the point is about you or someone else or fiction the point is well taken.

that person being spoken have a great understanding of life and know what

they want.

What it seems to be saying no matter who uou are ain't anyone going to give

you anthing.

If anyone is looking in that stead they are going to lose all that is before them

and to some degree that true right. Very good Job and that is not you wanering

right... not a question... LOL ... Great Job... over look the errors...



Thank you,
The Iceman
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Review of Official Entry  Open in new Window.
Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)


Hi devadesirée:

That is very nice and anticipating.

Anyone is away can take comfort in the longing to be where well thought of Love.

That was God and I like it very much and the poem of your order and line structure.

Were all word rythme words sometime thats hard to? but you seems to have done agreat job

Good Job
Ice
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Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)


Hi Joy:

Your ablity of expresion is very good.

Is the concept centered on a lesson learn or did I miss the point?

It is hard to believe any can do better.

Is it any reason that your paragraphs could have been more metered and what do i want to say more even thats it more even right?

More your are good and great.

Ice...

please over look errors...
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Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)


Hi elizjohn:

Thank you that is remarkable in all it contents and what is to be said...

The smooth structured story told the story of the whole concept of life which in this

earth is family..

Man they needed four childern, do I need to say who he should be? and I won't.

That is an excellent story despite the unbirth of that other needed child...

Thank You
Ice
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Review of At two  Open in new Window.
Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)


Hi Kåre Enga in Montana:

You made me laugh.

That was so maternal and the phrase made nice impressions.

There are the memories of a child in the security and nuture it needs with the

bounding involved.

Good Job,
Ice
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Review of The last goodbye  Open in new Window.
Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)


Hello Leila:

Your story is so true because the lost of a love one places you in that haze of a

daze.

I love your love in sharing those details as if you are apart of that lost.

Very good job of expressing that moment in clear details.

Then you think of the value of that love one whereby everyone no matter is

somebody no matter whether good or bad…

Some people are more gifted and productive as well as moral…

The ending is memorable...

Is it felt or fell at the crying end just a question?

Thank You,
Ice
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Review of Tricks  Open in new Window.
Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)


Hi BreakingCharity

There is a reality to your concept...

Many ought to grasp the feeling of how young people are caught not just in sin but

uncaring.

We will be back as a family caring for our love ones.. trust me its here now.

Nice prose maybe you would consider line structure...
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Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Hi Tye:

That is a nice story.

It is very easy to follow it is a reality is in many homes around the world.

You made some great expressed moments one like "she smiles and gives him

a big hug like no one else can do".

Man I love that... just like grandma's hands.

I love your details even in naming your characters and place... details win me

every time.

I would like to see you break those paragraphs down they are somewhat long

units… which drags me out...

Your concept is fantastic and should be placed in every should in the world.

The act of family love and respect is needed because life is real and better for

some and not for others.

It is simple easy kind explainable love that makes the world goes around.

I did not like it… I loved it!

Thank You,
Ice
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Review of Gay Marriage  Open in new Window.
Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)


Hello Aeron:PanHomoPolyAceQueer:

First, Do your Poll really matter when it comes to what one think of

two men marring each other, especially since we live I a democratic

republic?

Second, I believe that when God created human beings he gave them

freewill as well as Mind, Soul/Spirit, and Body having faith.

Third, one having freewill has personal preferences which can be

expressed as good or bad.

In addition, it is hard to live in between good and bad whereby it has

be to one or the other which is in all aspects of life..

Four, who upon this plane and realm can judge anyone,

Five, all humans have grace and that is a gift of God.

Six, no matter good, or bad all human beings have consequences for

their action…

In addition, no matter what we believe we need a God to judge

those injudicious preferential erroneous wills and deeds of human

beings.

Seven, and finally there are three kinds of people on planet earth:

Believers
Skeptical
Nonbelievers

Whether male or female live your life to the fullest and let whatever be is...

We are “The Human Family” of “One Body” having many members.

So For I say live in love in “The Pure Spirit of Light Of Mind Of

Love” (God), unto the justification of Jesus ,The Christ.

Thank You,
Ice
P.S. Be well Family…
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Review by Mr.Ice Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
Hi tara:

I did like the concept of the story being classic vampires satire.

It seems to me that there should have been more clarity as to where and when

this all took place.

Maybe in my reading I missed who was telling this story.

To me needed there to be more of an explanation about the different groups.

There wasn't any information on that matter that left you wondering me much.

The battle scene was more clearer than the reason of the plot.

The naming of the characters is what kept your attention.

There were some typing errors of words but not a serious issue.

Long paragraph at times loses me that is me and not you.

Thank you,
Ice
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