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Review by mrjansanman Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Bravo! Good rhyming and flow. I definitely agree with: He tickles your ears with what you want to hear,
and then he pulls your strings like a puppeteer.
He pleads for faith and then takes your money.
Then, he acts like a clown trying to be funny.

Unfortunately most religions are very similar to this as well. Most are nothing but big business.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Yes I can feel your anger. I especially appreciate how you are angry as a Christian. Nothing irks me more than the hypocritical clergy class lording over the common folk, teaching them lies and fleecing the flock of their hard earned money, as they live in shameless luxury.

Nice job!

Don
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Review of God, Why oh Why?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Very touching. I could feel the pain and confusion. I enjoy rhyming poetry done right. I enjoyed it very much.

Also I want to reassure you that the four horseman are underway. If you want to know why I know this let me know.

Don
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed your heartfelt poem very much. I could feel the frustration you feel in honestly seeking God.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like your style of poetry. I didn't quite understand all of your metaphors but it is probably just me.
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