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Review of The God Factory  
Review by Cole Dawson
Rated: E | (3.0)
The dialogue got confusing at times, especially in the beginning. The setting is hard to grasp at first, and that just might be you style of dialogue confusing me. It seems like a very interesting concept though. I'm interested to hear and read more, but I can't really give any suggestions because i'm still foggy on what the concept really is. Keep writing, i'm very curious.
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