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Rated: E | (5.0)
Clever wordplay. This is something I struggled with when assigned this in school. It was difficult to come up with words which began with the set letters and managed to accurately convey the message. I stand in awe of this as it not only conveys the message but instills all the emotions as well. Good work!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
You capture the emotions clearly. Not an easy task.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Descriptive and incredibly visual. I like that there's hope at the end; how the speaker broke free from life in the coal mines and went their own way.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Resonating strongly with this. Thank you for making yourself known and heard. Thank you for sharing so others might not have to feel alone.
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Review of Remembrance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful and sad at the same time. I remember my days with a real tree; nostalgia points there. Thanks for the memories.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
That was exciting. Interesting. It seems like an excerpt, though. It'll definitely lead readers to wonder what happened next.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Simple, but beautiful.
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Review of I Remember  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is heartbreaking. I love it because it's a truth. I was a home care worker and I can relate.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
This is how I feel a lot of the time; I don't do well in social situations. I'm glad that Fergus still has his friends. Good pace and flow.
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