The way you described the scenery is very intense! I liked it, and I say that cause I actually don't like when there is too much room for descriptive content.
My only problem here is that I don't find the reason to this situation. I understood why it happened but It would have been great to enhance this part with more details.
Anyway, that was great, I will look at your other texts!
SKYone
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