YES, you should continue! That was 3, 2 sentence paragraphs long so you should figure it needs alot more. Next time you make something that short make sure the plot moves quickly.
Yes yes, I'm very sure that we will all die! Thanx especially to George Dubya Bush! But not because of global warmings because Bush is gonna cause Nuclear Winter anyway. But cuz he's turning the US into a 1750s Texas!
I must honestly say, if the story were extended, divided into chapters, and accompanied by a few cheap artworks that have a little bit to do with part of the book, then it would easily become an award winning novel. One suggestion, why not make some exciting/eyecatching parts throughout the story to keep the average reader focused. Naturally, having ADHD, it was a bit hard to stay in tact top to bottom. Other than that, GREAT JOB!
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