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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I saw this in the read & review section while I was working on my story, and I saw the title, I thought okay, but the title doesn’t really fit the poem that much, I think you should edit it, but other than that, it’s really nice.
The poem overall is really emotional, it’s sad, but maybe you should add a little bit of hopefulness, or something happy to make the overall mood of the poem a little brighter.


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