Hey, I wanted to return the favor and review a work of yours. I picked this piece at random. I don't have much to say by way of critique, as I found it to be immensely enjoyable, well-polished, often humorous, and satisfying in its conclusion. I am envious of your voice-- the casual, conversational air. The wording was unobtrusive without being overly simple, and I would have no problem believing that this was a letter written to me by a disturbed friend, or even a story told frantically over a beer at the local watering hole. The dialogue rang as true to life, the inner monologue of the narrator was smooth and cohesive. It was a pleasure to read.
P.S. Aliens may very well be disguising themselves as socks. You never know!
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