I really enjoyed reading this ghost story. You have great story telling ability. I hope you write more ghost stories to keep people like me entertained.
I like this story. Interesting and entertaining. I like to hear ghost stories from other countries as well. There's about so many ghost stories to tell in just about all around the world.
I love this story. It's also a very sad story. And it happens in real life. People buy houses and think that they'll be happy in them just to find that they are not alone. When I was a kid even before I was born my parents went through that themselves.
I really liked this story very interesting and entertaining. Just don't know if it's finished. What happened to the Uncle is what I want to know. Your character stabbed him with the poison dart but did he die and vanished or what. I think you need to continue on with the story and give it a mind blowing ending.
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