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Review of Tick Tock  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
lol...pretty cool idea. i'm morea fan of the nw kind of poem than the poem itself, butboth were good.

in the fourth line, i would try saying "water THEN rock" and in the sixth line, i'm not sure what you meanby the word "cock"

other than that, very interesting. would like to see more from ya :)
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Rated: E | (4.5)
awesome...sounds like the start of a very interesting and challenging life. wish i could live up to these words. pretty cool, pfox
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