powerful evocative piece that touched my heart. I ecpecially loved the simile you used in the 6th line
'They burned deep like ascid' I also really liked the last 2 lines. they were so powerful. I also liked the repition of the word 'Ripped' it made me feel very emotional keep up the good work
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