Really nice poem. :D I've heard the joke before but putting it like that made it funny all over again. Nicely written, easy to read and entertaining.I love how you fit the dialogues into your verse without losing the rhythm. Good job!
I think your piece was beautiful. It's short but sweet and expresses a powerful journey in very few words. I could relate, completely, to what you were saying. The whole piece is an inspiration-to keep trying, to keep writing, to retain individuality.
I love your imagery. It gives a very clear picture of the aunt and it's easy to understand why such a person would be inspiring.
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