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635 Public Reviews Given
635 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
Encouraging but helpful. Most of the review will be about how good/what i liked about your writing, but i will point out flaws if i see any! :)
I'm good at...
Short Stories
Favorite Genres
Mystery, Sports, Romance
Least Favorite Genres
Murder Mysteries
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I will review pretty much anything
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Review of A Good Writer  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
this was a great read! I'm trying to figure outmyself what makes a good writer and I think what you wrote helped me a little bit. A good writer (to me) is one who uses creativity, detail and emotion in their stories, makes the characters seem believable, writes what they are comfortable with writing, and doesn't mind taking advice from others. Great story!!!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
Two girls aurging make a really great story! Bitch fight!!! Anyway, I liked how you showed how annoyed and angry the one was and how the other was jsut trying to calm her down. That is definalty a sibling relationship. It was funny too because the one sister is making a big deal out of nothing (aka the kidnapping of her best friend) and the other just seems amused. *Sigh* Great Work!!!
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Review of A Horse Of Legend  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
Horses!!! YAY!!!! I used to ride horses so everytime I heard the word I squeal like a little girl! Not squeal but you know what I mean. "“tremendous running machine” Detail and creativity is all you need to be a writer so that was perfect. "The fastest racehorse that ever raced" Great line!
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Review of The Great Idea  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Ah, a day with the wife! My dad loves that so he would love this story!!! :) "Why else would they build enormous domes that looked like God pooped a golf ball and a pinwheel donut in the middle of this beautiful landscape? " For some reason, this line made me laugh. As i read that line I'm thinking "He does it because he can do anything!" Great plot, great story, great ending! Cheers!!!
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Review of Not Even a Mouse  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
This is such a kid thing! Only they could imagine being the mouse and climbing a tree! I loved the details you put in there and how you put the thoughts. That was a great touch. And of course she goes to bed when Santa is about to come, LOL!!!! "
Molly’s father picked up the sleeping girl. She smiled in her grogginess, with candy cane still smeared upon her lips." That last line was great! Cheers!!!!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
this was such an AMAZING story!!! so much detail and emotion and... ok, I'm just going to slow down a little bit. The beginning was great! You gave us the character and set up the setting. Drawing someone in with the first line or two is always a good start for a writer. The title made me want to find out more about this character. Was he poor? What was he doing in the subway? As I read it, it was clear that he was playing just to make people happy. That's one of the best things we can do: make people happy. Great Work!!!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
a song/poem for the birthday of a website? That's very creative! I've never thought about doing that before! Creavtity, detail, and emotion are all a big part of writing and you should all three of those thing perfectly in your poem! "
The online writing community
A place to be creative and play!
Creating this sense of unity -
Let's all celebrate - today's the day!" I'm not sure why, but this is my favorite line. CHEERS!!!!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
i found this poem funny yet really awesome at the same time. I'm a Catholic so I kindof get where this is going. I loved how you put all the quotes in the middle and the rest of the story to the left. That's really nice formating work! Great job!!!
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Review of My Secret Name  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
short and sweet! that's the way poems should be! I *Heart* it!
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Review of Fountain of Youth  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
i love this! I'm eighteen years old so this applies to me! ;) You used lots of emotion in this poem and emotion is something a good writer needs in any story. "A woman of eighteen,
I stand before the fountain weeping,
I have gained eternal youth and life,
but I must relearn eighty years of wisdom." i just *Heart* these lines!
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Review of The Dream  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
this was a great tribute to a great leader! I love it when i see leaders get tributes-it makes them even more special. "The dreams
that birthed a land
echoes within each soul,
their light shining like a beacon
for all." this was one of my favorite lines in the poem, probably because it's true! Great Job!!!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
LOL!!! this is how boys and girls who are at bars act!!! this was a great poem and i hope you keep writing! Great Job!!! :)
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Review of Apologies  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
awww! This was a really cute apology! When people's feelings get hurt, it's better to give them some time to cool off rather than say sorry right away-although sometimes that's works too! :)
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Review of One Mistake  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
this was a very good poem! I like how you made the reader feel guilty along with the character-that's the sign of a good writer. Writers should make their readers feel the same way the character is feeling, and then some. "Though she looked at me twice, I turned my face over the side

Now that minute tears my heart with the regret not to look back" that's gonna turn against him real quick, LOL!!!!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
this was a really cute little story. Memories of our childhood or with our kids/grandkids are always special. you can never get them back so hold on too them. "Suddenly tears flooded Linda’s eyes. Why’d she start to cry?
Approaching was Jason…carrying that toad-stool topiary he had
bought for his mother. And it was the only thing that he did buy…" the ending was great!
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Review of Dreams  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
AWWW!!! this was a really cute poem. It invokes a feeling of love, peace and friendship. "The world has a color I've never known
For the first time my eyes are open
I dream while I'm awake because you've shown
What no dream could ever improve again" these were my favorite lines in the poem. Great Work!!!!!
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Review of "It"  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
this was an interesting poem. it is very thought-provoking. It was short, but right to the point. "Its effect in Man produces many a sad tale,
for it can turn a reasonable man into a brute." this is my favorite line in the poem: partly because it's true. Great work!!!!
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Review of The Act  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
this was a very interesting poem! I'm not really sure how to feel in this one: sad, amused, or angry. Sometimes writers mix the readers emotions, and that can be the sign of a good writer. the poem was sweet and short and right to the point. "did you think
that the act
that had illicited sobs in the darkness
might inspire smiles in the light" these were my favorite lines!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
this was really good! don't know if this is autobiographical, but this had lots of emotion/feelings in it! if it is about you, i liked how you made the reader feel as you felt: sad, depressed, angry. All good stories-all good writings, i should say, should make the reader feel the emotion of the characters or the author. Great work!!
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Review of A feeling inside  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (4.5)
this was cute! I loved it a lot!!!! the words seemed to come from your soul, which is a very good place to start! "O father hold my right hand, for I'm just a shell with thoughts.

But with you I can touch my soul, finally I can see.

Forever I speak hiding my left hand" these were my favorite lines in the poem!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
this is a super good story! so far, I've been loving it! I like the way you descirbed G as been all flustered around this girl. Hmmm, is it love? I hope it's love, they would be very good together! but the blue jeans and the white tshirt suprised me-I had always though that G was wearing a suit! oh, well. :)
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Review of To Dear Friends  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
this was a good poem. I liked the fact that there was rhyming in there. Rhyming for a poem is very important! My favorite part of the poem? The women in this pub are so cute and attractive -
The night is still young, and the men are all active.
The ladies keep drinking, as the men spend the dollars;
Doesn't matter to them if they're white or blue collars.
Not a worry, tonight, as the pickings are prime!
Good fishing, my friends, it's all on your dime. that's what ppl do on a Saturday night!
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Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E | (5.0)
nice to meet you, shaun! how old are you?! The website is a great place to get started on your writing. people here give REALLY good reviews: i've gotten quite a few of them. don't be scared to talk to me or ask me for a review: i'll do it for sure! :)
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Review of Journey's End  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: E
that was very good! i loved the way you slanted the words just a bit-that is a very nice touch. The poem was great too! :)
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Review of Gift for Natalie  
Review by Izzy's Writing
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
W-O-W! That is insaying!!!! Poor Paul, Natale doesn't recognize him! :/ Great writing, it was very dramatic. The beginning scene was funny: "
“Well, aren’t these beautiful?” Shelly, my coworker said, moving the smooth petals between her fingers. “Someone’s lucky!”

“You mean someone’s getting lucky,” Tyler teased, reaching over her for the box of donuts." LOL!!! Leave her alone, Tyler! :)
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