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Review of Do You See Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
very encouraging prose!!

You really expressed your feelings and thoughts..

I like the way you write.!

Write On!
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Review by dhiLa Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Hi Marion!

I like the title of your poem. Very interesting.
Oh, And I like these lines:Life is only the perception of life;
life doesn’t exist if you don’t believe in it.
I totally agree!

But I don't quite understand what you mean by:so in turn the smartest people are the ones who fail.

And I think the ending needs to be put a little more surprising (or catchy) words.
Because I couldn't really catch the feeling of the last line..

But overall, I liked it.
You really have the potential..

Write On!
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Review of "Hope Never Dies"  Open in new Window.
Review by dhiLa Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very encouraging and inspiring!!
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Review of Noticing Newbies  Open in new Window.
Review by dhiLa Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello...helloo...

I'm so glad to be here.. I love writing a lot, but I never found a suitable online community for me to join.
So, I'm really hoping through this community, I can improve my writing skills and also make friends!

Thanks a lot!
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Review by dhiLa Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hello...

I'm new here..
I love writing a lot and hopefully through this community, I'll get better experience and make heaps of friends!

I'm a really easy going person..

thanks a lot!!
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