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I really enjoy reading and helping other improve on their work (if possible). Pretty much every genre is a "go" for me when it comes to stories and poetry, as long as it is at least some-what interesting. I really like to give creative feedback, find plot-holes and give minor suggestions on how to fix both stories and grammar...P.S. please note that when I read through someone's work, I expect to see the effort put into creating that work.
I'm good at...
Reading through and fining plot holes and making suggestions based on what you have written so far. I tend to find most basic spelling adn grammer errors as well.
Favorite Genres
fiction, romance, adventure, horror, supernatural...
Least Favorite Genres
non-fiction, fan fiction
Favorite Item Types
novels, poems, short stories
I will not review...
Midnless smut, unreadable content, and fan-fiction.
Public Reviews
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Review of The magic flower  Open in new Window.
Review by NannaDoodles Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Lovely writing and very vivid imagery is portrayed through your choice in wording and vocab. I fairly enjoyed this read and the flow was smooth and steady for the most part, though I feel I must note a few things for your attention;

-The title should read "The Magic Flower" instead of "The magic flower".

-In paragraph 3, Line 4 it reads "I wretched my eyes and dried my tears," which looks and feels like there should be something after "wretched my eyes" (like "wretched my eyes open , possibly? Idk, it just throws off the flow a bit to me, do with it what you think best)

That was all that stood out to me, your writing was wonderful, great work!
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Review by NannaDoodles Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Short and sweet, a few moments where the wording seemed like it could have been phrased better to keep the flow but for the most part this was fantastic! Great work!
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Review of Down Memory Lane  Open in new Window.
Review by NannaDoodles Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very touching and he writing was great. This piece felt very real and held a surprising amount of emotion for something as "short and sweet" as it was. There didn't seem to be any spelling or grammatical errors that stood out to me either. Wonderful work!
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Review of In Sepia  Open in new Window.
Review by NannaDoodles Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Very thought-provoking from my own standpoint. The piece seemed to flow nicely and it held a distinguished impression throughout the entire read. (I quite enjoyed the vocabulary used as well)
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Review by NannaDoodles Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
It looks like there was a space missing behind "...in her sleep.And" is where it is at. But other than that I could not find any real flaws in spelling or grammer. I quite liked this story a lot! I was suprised how it was so lighthearted despite a fairly seriouse situation. Which, is also great because that is how real life is. Even in hard times there are still smiles and little things that make our lives just a bit more bearable.

Keep up the great work, I look forward to reading more of your pieces!


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Review by NannaDoodles Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Very good discriptions and very short and to the point. It took me a moment (and a glance at the description) to realize what the piece was actually about, however. But, overall it was well written. The only problem I saw rigth off th ebat would be on the second line where "metal poles reached nto the air" it should be "into" not "nto". But other than that one spelling error I did not see any technical mistakes.
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Review by NannaDoodles Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Beautifully written with a very dark yet lovely tone. Overall I enjoyed this poem wuite a bit and I didn't see any tech. errors to speak of during my read through. Keep up the great work, I would love to stumble on your work again in the future.
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Review by NannaDoodles Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I adore the physical apearence of your writing and the deep meaning. The sad yet humble tone to this piece made me like it quite a bit. I didn't see any errors that stod out any. Overall, good job!
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Review of Praying  Open in new Window.
Review by NannaDoodles Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really enjoy the flow, deep but not overwhelming with any particular emotion. I felt the words more than anything, very short and sweet with no extra loose ends. So overall, I liked it a lot. Not the best ever but deffinetly a great casual read I would show a friend. (Not to mention the wonderful meaning and serence undertone.) I don't think there is anything I could improve upon this to be honest.
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