How true, we are all so divided. God made us all, but religion is probably the main factor that divides us. Not only religion, but also the different sects in religion. If world was like what John Lennon had said in his song "imagine", we would have achieved world peace so long ago.
I usually wonder about the same thing, if everyone was born for a reason, then what reason were murderers, killers, suicide bombers born and mosquitoes born for. This is a really good poem, amazing the way you wrote it. I like how you begin each line with "forgive me father."
Dark but amazing!
Love's evil twin? Ah, having never experienced love (excluding my parent's and my grandparent's that is. crushes i had, but that doesn't count as love?) I agree, love is blind. People look at the face, the figure, and count it as love. What they don't get that it's not love but physical attraction. This is a really good description.
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Ironically, i did think of once running away from home when i was young, but i was too afraid to go out alone. I don't usually read prose, but title attracted me to it, and i must say this is a really good piece of work. It's very vivid, i can actually feel what the little boy's going through, poor thing. A good piece of work.
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Wow, this is a truly amazing. So, in this you've viewed night as a women and day as a man, as i can tell by the last line of the poem? I don't know why you have four stars as an over all average rating, because this a very beautiful poem. The imagery is beautiful and it's very vivid. I wish i could write like this.
Write on!
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