I enjoyed your piece very much.
I do however feel that the apostrophes you've included are unnecessary ...
I look forward to reviewing more of your works.
I'm confused ... was this a series of poems?
do the starred lines denote breaks in your poems direction?
I have to say I do lie the last one if they are separate, ... if not then the last stanza
i found the poem very well put together.
Great use of the words given to you by the "challenger"
I'm looking forward to reading more of your works ...
I may even give you a challenge of my own in the near future ...
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