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Review of Broken  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Good piece of poetry. Enjoyed reading it.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
A nice one.

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Review of Domestic Violence  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
This is really nice. The start is wonderful. Shocking was the disclosure that more than 40% of domestic violence victims are male. I still can't believe this. I had the notion that only women suffer during domestic violence. Agony and pain of the victim is wonderfully described in marvellous words.

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Review of Love Feel  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
That's a nice one.

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Review of Faith  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
That's a nice one.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well this is quite an unusual topic to write on but marvelously written ! And wow what a description ! Tastes of all the chocolates which I have eaten until now came to my mind and I felt eating them. This is what a person would feel exactly when he/she is left alone with a box of chocolates. After reading this I too gifted myself a chocolate ! Well written.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
A very vivid description. Depression is sure like a hell. It sucks you more whenever you want to break free.

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Review of Once  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The comparison of your wait for love with the growth of an apple tree ! What an amazing thought. Facing harsh realities of life for the want of love !
It was really nice.

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Review of Dear My Someone  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
That's a good, sweet piece !

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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Highly Erotic. But it took a serious note in the end. Overall a good one. Your description of the passionate moments was amazing.

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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
What an end! Shook me from inside. This is really a nice stuff. Emotions have the power to make one do anything. An emotionally disturbed person is the most dangerous I suppose.

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Review of Fallen down  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! What a a theme and what a way you have described it. You are a master storyteller. Marvellous !

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Review of Young Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A good one . Youth is undoubtfully the best period in one's life and to have a loved one adds to the romance of life.

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Review of endless love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
A cute and sweet little poem !

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sir, Reading your every work is a a lesson. I really didn't know what actually Ghazal was?
Wow! Who said there are no technicalities in the poetic world ?

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Review of DEEP INSIDE ME  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I think this is the way every writer feels while opening his creation for reviews. I feel very well connected to your thoughts.

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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well this is lovely, sweet and a cute poem. An affectionate union of two lovers described in beautiful, well crafted words. Use of beautiful verbs for heart, tones, kiss , spirit etc. depict your excellence and the level of your imagination. Wonderful use of language !

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Rated: E | (4.5)
A deadly audience is what someone wants so as not to be criticised or interrupted. It takes away all the fear of being ridiculed . But it also steals the words of praises that might have showered upon us. But I feel you are describing here a silence and a calm which every writer desires so as to give birth to new thoughts hitherto unheard of. Your way of describing is great !

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Review of SLOW DOWN  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Perfect advice for the youths of today who treat life as a race and speed as the only means to succeed. We have ceased to enjoy the precious moments of life in this rat race. Perhaps this is what you mean when you say
Slow down, look back for a while;
Maybe you just missed a smile.

But the best lines in this work are :Slow down, slow down, not so fast;
These paths are going to last.

If only we could understand this, we would be more contented and happy.

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Review of Grief  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Excellent!

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Review of His Last Breath  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Thats nice and highly emotional.

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Review of Unfaithful  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Great lines! Great work! What a content in so few words!

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Review of Chameleon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
To be cared, to be admired , to be loved and thus to be noticed is Human tendency. Invisibility snatches this opportunity rudely and one finds oneself cowering alone . To be a part of something but not to be considered a part is deeply agonizing.
Invisibility of emotions is when you are not understood. You stand there with your soul bleeding, out in the open.
Physical invisibility is when you are ignored. You try to blend, to mix but you find yourself passing through everyone. Gazes seem to penetrate you , they pierce you but not notice you. That's a horrific stage to go through.

Six beautiful and meaningful lines in one short marvellous piece of work !
Its like a beautiful portrait kept to be admired. This is brightly visible !

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Review of Love is like that  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Exceptionally beautiful written. Height of imagination in a few words. Each and every line is to be read, admired and preserved for its beauty. At first you defined love as Pheromones. Here you took both the physical and emotional aspects of it. Love makes people involve with each other. Just as like a chemical reaction, new products are created which make life beautiful. Birth of new round of emotions. Generation of a whole new.
Love is also about caring.To share feelings. To understand and to make someone our better half.To tell that whatever happens we would be there . Just as beautiful spots on butterfly wings. They are of bright colour and seem to change when viewed from different angles. They are always there to give their beauty to the butterfly and make it an object of admiration. Whatever view the world may take regarding your loved one, you are always there to support , to make your partner win in every situation. You want your loved one to rise to every occasion. Just as the spots on a butterfly's wings make it look beautiful and different, whatever angle you look from. Thats what love does for you. Beautiful thought yet in such simple and few words.
Love is also about expressing oneself and making one's life better. The expression "Tomorrow's another day" , if I am not wrong, signifies this only. To make present better along with the promise of a lovely tomorrow. Yes , Love is making future lovely so that life seems worth living.

Yes Love surely is what you have beautifully expressed.

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Sir, The essence of life depicted in simple but convincing words.
Comparing life with shedding of leaves is a marvellous thought !
If humans could understand this simple logic, then this world would certainly be a better place.

If we could accept that life is a bubble
No worries would bother us nothing would trouble.
But alas! We are humans and destined to live in pain
Loosing precious moments and never do we gain !

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