Love that song, and I've had this moment... wow that was cool to read. I've never heard a poem with song lyrics quoted in it but maybe because of my personal experience it works well, nice work man!
Nice man! I've gotten the chance to speak to many vets diagnosed with PTSD and this poem lines up perfectly with the words they shared with me. There may be a collection of symptoms, but the DSM doesn't even begin to capture its essence.
I really enjoyed reading this! From what I gathered this was about the sensation and experience of dying and merging with God/the creator? I really like how it contrasts impermanence and the infinite. Good stuff.
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