Interesting! I was surprised when the old man jumped ott the cliff, and then I was surprised again that he actually started to fly. Although I have to admit, the story would have more impact, if the old man jumped into his death. It would have been shocking.
I found a lot of expressions in brackets. I think you should remove them from the story, because it makes it difficult to read. Otherwise I could have read it fluently from the beginning to the end.
Amazing short story! It made me think for a while, there are a lot of deep thoughts in it. You didn't have too much space to show us how the world ended, but you did an excellent job doing so. I couldn't find any mistake in the text either.
I think it was very well written. Being alone is not the best thing, especially not in adult life, when it is much easier to work things out together, as a team.
The ending is quite absurd, but I like it that way. I thought the protagonist is someone around 25, maybe 28 looking for a husband, but it turns out it's an old lady who is alone, and I suppose, she doesn't want to die alone. It's sad, but that's life, you know, it's just not fair.
I like this story. The characters are interesting, I like your style, the narration works fine in my opinion. I'm not an expert in terms of English, but I had no trouble here with new words.
The world in interesting, I read many science-fiction books, I've seen some similar things, but I ultimately think there is enough unique things in here. Although you should work on getting new information to the readers, in the beginning, I felt I am lost in this world.
Good job :)
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