While it does let's transpire feeling, i think it's miss something, in the middle where you "look" it's seems more an affirmation than a feeling, in my modest opinion, that part broke the poem. The only possible answer to sadness, is always to remember that there is no person more blind than one that walk with it's eyes closed.
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