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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the idea...but I think it is missing some more painful details.

The "story" told in this poem is very heart renching because of the time we are living in, but...I think that this is a common tale. I think that if you tweeked the details to make it more personal, it would be a much more captivating read.

Overall, Excellent writing!
Maria
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was beautifully writen. I think that this poem speaks for many of us who feel judged and crusified. I really enjoyed reading this...great job!
Maria
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