you wrote me about my father poem and I decided that I should come read yours. Honestly I loved it. I especially liked the repeation in the last line; that gave it more emotion and meaning, (i'm sure that's what you were going for anyways) but I gave this one 5 stars.
i know excatly what you mean, i have two cats of my own that i envy their pleasurable sleep. i loved that you expressed this in so little words. well done.
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