I was reading through the information provided for newbies and came across this article. I was reading and as I read I could see that the information wasn't following it's own advise. Then I got to the second section and realized that it was the same information that had already been provided but in this case the tips were being used. I was very impressed at the way the whole subject was approached. It being shown by example made the point crystal clear. I learned a lot just by reading the before and after. I really enjoyed the fact that I was able to visualize the point. The difference was night and day. Thank you! -Nicole
I enjoyed reading your short story. It would have made a nice beginning to a book or novel. I could feel the emotion both hurt and happiness. You a very good story teller. You put enough information in it to get the story across, I just feel like it was lacking an ending. Like the story could continue and would be interesting still. Over all I really enjoyed it and I would look forward to a follow up or another piece of your work. Thank you!
-Nicole
I enjoy reading your poem. I see that you used a particular format to establish rhythmic flow. It was very good. I like to use creative licenses when I write because it gives you a little more room for alternative thoughts and creative ways of stating a verse or line. Very nice-Nicole
Hello, I am a mental health patient and my specialty is bi-polar. Actually I have multiple diagnoses. Severe depression, anxiety, adhd, personality disorder and agoraphobia. I also have physical disabilities that make the psychological disabilities magnified. I struggle with 2 disabled children. I always have to be aware of my mood or reactions because they don't understand mental illness. In my bi-polar I don't usually have the "highs," I have normal that spans to severe depression. With the right medication my symptoms are controlled. I identify with what was said about being labeled "dysfunctional". Mine is just so obvious that I can't even hide or keep it to myself. For me it's a known fact. I feel that if you can get the treatment you need, anyone can lead a more, closer to normal life.
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