Thank you for telling me about this story you wrote. It is excellent. If you made this up it is good but if it is true it is fantastic for the simple reason that you could lay it all out there like that. In any event I makes one think about themselves and their life, easy or hard, and compare. As far as grammar and the rest of a review goes I won't even claim to be that knowledgeable. It was an emotional article and I enjoyed it very, very much.
Good work! A very inspirational story. Something for everyone I would think. It moved me deeply. I have for years had issues with depression and I believe your story will help me greatly going forward. You have a talent I believe and a great deal to offer. I will watch out for more of your work.
HEY THERE, You seeing the light man? This is the way of the future. Go capitalism. Prisoners for hirer. Slaves if you will. I don't have to tell you anything. Great article.
Like your story. Don't know if it is fiction or a real dilemma but I do know some people are never lucky enough to have ever been there in the first place. I found your article well written and interesting to the end. I really felt you and your situation. I am new here and am trying to read as many stories as I can to see how others do it. I think you do it well. I am not a good critic as I lack in the necessary knowledge. I do know what I like though and you work for me. Keep up the good work.
very good, I loved your poem. I also suffer from depression and sometimes very severe. I am amazed you can find it possible to write in the depths of despair. I do know that sometimes it can bring out the very essence of a persons being, so I trust you are not too down. take care
right on. love your story. I feel born again myself. you have a way with the words. they seem to come naturally to you so don't give up on writing. I am probably not a good reviewer as I don't even capitalize my sentences. Just kidding. I feel you must have had some tough times and you know what it is like. Also the ability to express yourself. good for you and do keep it up..
Well done mon ami. Enjoyed this very much. Had a great laugh and was completely entertained. I am new to this site and am spending as much time reading others work as I can. I can only say I know what I like and this is very well written in my opinion and you should be proud. I hope to read more of your work in the future as you produce it. Way to go.
All I can say is I found it very interesting and fun to read. I also am new here and not too sure about reviewing. I do know what I like and you have a knack for it I would say. Keep it up. You will do well. I am sure of this.
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