You've touched my heart and made me teary eyed. Wonderfully written of such greatness that captured the power, beauty and dangerous nature of the ocean. Goddess is a perfect way to describe the ocean. Which is why humanity must work had to protect and clean the seas.
This is the best thing I've read all day. I mean the writing, the realistic characters and the beautiful descriptions of this story is on par with some of the the great American novels. You should try your hand in publishing books, you might get very successful.
Excellent work you've done here. Is this a metaphor for how silent and quite death can be? Death can take you from life without warning and quick as lighting. Or is this about the biblical Apocalypse where all good men are taken to heaven? Either way good job on this.
Excellent work on this story, well done. The writing was easy to read and to the point, the Bella felt realistic and relatable at the same time. I hope I can become a writer as good as you are. It's part of the reason I join this website in the first place.
I found this to be a wonderfully dark crazy little ride. Thank you for this entertaining zombie action filled story you've written here. A quick question, is this a unofficial sequel to the Tim Burton's Alice in Wonderland? Or the just the original stories?
Well you did a magnificent job on this story. You've a capture the thoughts and wishes of a young child who desires to escape the cold cruel gripe of reality and live in a realm of fantasy and magic. I can relate too because in this modern crazy dispersing world, it make one want escape to find a better live.
Well done job you've done on this poem here. plenty of people long to live in Wonderland or at least visit such a place in their live time, especially considering how more messed up the world seems to be getting each day. Hoping for world better than the current one.
Truly magnificent piece of work you've written here. You should feel so proud. You painted a grim picture of how jealously, while still a human emotion, can become a deadly disease on the level as cancer. And how desire can turn good people into bitter shadows of their former selfs.
Well this was an enjoyable read. So deliciously dark and yet frightening. Was this about a man who fears death and wishes to escape it? Or is it about how one feels when about the unescapable journey to the grave and beyond? Or am I completely wrong about the meaning of the poem?
What a wonderfully written story. A trio of interesting and likeable characters, including a gentle giantess. And I like how they try to take care of a human baby. I hope you continue this original and great story.
Very awesome work on this well written chapter. Thanks very much for getting the next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. As usual, splendid job on the exchanges, humor, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
This was a very good story I tell you what. I am a huge fan of Gentle Giantess stories. And was a very decent one. But I feel I must point out a couple of things. First, this story was way too short. And secondly, I think you could have added alot more description.
To be honest, I like the story. The Story was very well written. But I don't really like it. I am a fan of gentle giantess. Not the evil and cruel man eatting kind seen here. I feel really bad for the poor adventurer. I really do not like sad ending. But it was a nice story.
Wow, That was a really awesome story. It was scary yet cool at the same time. The "We will take back what is ours." give me chills and made my skin crawl. But the story could have been alot more longer. You need to the details of the story. Descibe the location.
I must say, you did an awesome job on this story. I simply loved it. I found very good. I really liked all the characters. I felt sorry for Moon flower. I wish I could give her a big warm hug. I only wish that the story could have been a little more longer. I wonder if you could find the time to do a sequal.
Awesome work on this story. I simply loved, loved, loved, and LOVED it! I found this particular story to very very original. It was very different from all the other Alice in Wonderland stories around on this website. And very funny as well. you did a wonderful and Great job on this story. Too bad it could not be any more longer.
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