I cant believe you cranked this one out in one day. I knew you had something when you started writing it on paper and read it to me during the commecials. It takes a good story to get you away from football. lol
I really did enjoy the way this story comes full circle. You created good characters and I could really SEE them, their surroundlings, and understand what they were going through. Awesome job. I think this could end up being one of your best. I hope you will think about publishing it.
You know how much I love the NCIS tv show and you have done an awesome job of portraying both Leroy Jethro Gibbs and Abby in a story that is all yours. The love, trust thing between them is cool on the show without being sexual but you have taken it to the next level here and mad it work.
my wife suggested I read your NCIS story because I am a huge fan of the CBS series. I was not too sure. Didnt want to see the characters butched but you did a really good job. Im not much into romance but you did a really good job making the characters sound believeable...true to the show. Great job most especially for your first story. I will check back.
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