I love the words you use. It creates this strong emotion that I take out of the poem, I can feel the pain of the girl who has just lost someone so special. It's a very nice poem. :)
I also find it very difficult telling my secrets that I keep, even to my boyfriend, due to lots of mistakes and betrayal in the past... Though I'm starting to tell people things more, and I hope in time I'll get rid of the shield I bar other people with. :)! Great poem, it can relate to anyone and it's easy to picture using your choice of words. Keep it up!
that was an awesome read! you should really continue this is you can, because i'm definitely hungry for more. your descriptive writing is great and you really get in to Charlie's character.
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