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Review of Watchful Starman  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
It is lovely poem. The starman is akin to a guiding angel


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Review of eclipse  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (3.5)
Lovely! The eclipse has explained by the writer to his dog keeps me thinking. What a way to define eclipse? Children would love it.

The use of first person singular and the third person singular can be a bit confusing. But going into the story and living the story shows it is a narrative.


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