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Review of Dangerous Spell  Open in new Window.
Review by Black Orchid Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Explains the dilemma well.
Good rhyming and use of tempo.

Just one thing if I may?

Your skin is enticing, a hot spicy taste

You have already used spicy before - and its use so soon, weakens the impact of this line - maybe another adjective??


Keep writing - Í 've enjoyed your work.

Black Orchid
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Short, sharp and impactful - well done!

I hope that Writing.com gives you a space to have allthose words locked in the box a place to be heard.

Looking forward to seeing more of your work.


Black Orchid
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Another opportunity - is there anything you have not thought of to put on this site to promote and support writers where ever they may be?
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
You have used some good weather images here that express the pain. A good start - looking forward to seeing you write some more!
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