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Review of The Mighty Oak  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
dear starwriter,

Your mighty Oak,


It is a good piece!



Stephen
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Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
dear Bear,

Your poem "Boots of Bellfonte"

It is a very unusual but pretty, some time hilarious piece!
Written in the first person (a dog or cat?)it describes the human nature well! I first thought the first person was either a man or a woman!
It is a nice story!
I like it.


SDtephen
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Review of Crying Daughter  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear SSm


your poem "crying daughter"

a good idea.
it sounds like a prose.

keep it up!


Stephen
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Review of Dancing  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear Raen,


yr poem "dancing"

It is a good poem & I like it.


Stephen
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Review of Burning Leaves  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear JWR,

yr poem "burning leaes"

it is very emotional & good!



Stephen
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Review of Buddy  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear LE,

yr poem "buddy"

it is a nice poem about a lost dog.

well done,



Stephen
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Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear TC,

your poem "when love..."

yes it is a good emotional poem.


Stephen
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Review of On the run  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear 11 9 7,

your poem 'on the run'

it is easy to read & a fresh poem,

I like it,


Stephen
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Review of Darkness Creeps  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear jenndoss,


your;darkness....'

it describes light & darkness well,

well, keep it up,


thx,


Stephen
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Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear kv,

your poem'I am knocking..'

yes it is a good one!,

I like it,


Stephen
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Review of Words  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear TC,


your poem'words'

u r correct!



Stephen
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Review of Sand  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear T C,


your'Sand'

it is a simple & good poem,

but looks like rather a prose,


good work,


Stephen
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Review of Firelight  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear S,


your poem 'firelight'


it looks rather a prose than a poem?

but the fire is very well described!

I like it

Stephen
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Review of We must remember  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear Thomas,

yr poem 'we must remember'


yes, we must remember the fallen heroes!

it is a good poem



Stephen
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Review of First Time  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
dear J S,

your poem 'first time'

it looks like a real experience!

simply written

but really nice.


Stephen
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Review of Those eyes!  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Saloni,

Yr prose 'those eyes'

it is a nice piece!


thx,


Stephen
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Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Dear Boompenguins,

Yr poem 'paranoia'

is it from yr real experiences?

a very short prose rather than a poem

but a good one


thx,


Stephen
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Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Mary Ann,

Yr poem'Crocus'

it is a small but a good poem,


what is the name of the flower u mean?

thank u,


Stephen
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Review of Different Views  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Jeff,

Yr poem'different views'

it is a good one,

I think our paths, we shall have to choose.


thx,

Stephen
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Review of Slither  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear TW,

Yr poem 'Slither'

I really like the line

'My only escape the words on a page.'


thanks



Stephen
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Review of The Blur  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
it is a small but a good poem
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Review of Most Inseparable  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
a small poem but good
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Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (3.0)
oh, like a gangster movie!

the poem is a little confusing but there's suspense in it

Good
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Review of 9/6/2016  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear R.M.S.


It's okay to have problems. Somebody will be there to fix them.

It is a good poem, or rather could u categories it as a prose?

good luck,



Stephen


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Review of Raced  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
To Heleny,

Yr poem 'Raced'

It is a beautifully written & a short, nice poem


good job



Stephen


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