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Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
dear Keaton Foster,

Your poem 'A home I'll never see'

It really describes the thoughts of a homeless man!
And eagerness to have a home by himself, watching what people do in their homes, watching from outside with a touch of sadness in his heart!

You write very well KF!

I really like your items


Stephen
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Review of The Mighty Oak  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
dear starwriter,

Your mighty Oak,


It is a good piece!



Stephen
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Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
dear Bear,

Your poem "Boots of Bellfonte"

It is a very unusual but pretty, some time hilarious piece!
Written in the first person (a dog or cat?)it describes the human nature well! I first thought the first person was either a man or a woman!
It is a nice story!
I like it.


SDtephen
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Review of At The Fence  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
dear KF,

Your 'at the fence'

It reminded me of the song "the green door" What's happening inside the green door?
as in the poem life is always wondering, guessing,contemplating,with betrayals, & winning!
You have so many fresh ideas & you write well!
That's all matter!

Stephen
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Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
dear KF,

Your poem 'feed the fire....'

As always you write in a different style. I feel happy to read those lines!.From where you get those ideas, I wonder?
Well you seem to be writing about life at it's best and bad times.
Your style makes your stories unique!

Stephen
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Review of Crying Daughter  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear SSm


your poem "crying daughter"

a good idea.
it sounds like a prose.

keep it up!


Stephen
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Review of Dancing  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear Raen,


yr poem "dancing"

It is a good poem & I like it.


Stephen
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Review of Burning Leaves  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear JWR,

yr poem "burning leaes"

it is very emotional & good!



Stephen
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Review of Buddy  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear LE,

yr poem "buddy"

it is a nice poem about a lost dog.

well done,



Stephen
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Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear TC,

your poem "when love..."

yes it is a good emotional poem.


Stephen
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Review of On the run  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear 11 9 7,

your poem 'on the run'

it is easy to read & a fresh poem,

I like it,


Stephen
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Review of Darkness Creeps  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear jenndoss,


your;darkness....'

it describes light & darkness well,

well, keep it up,


thx,


Stephen
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Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear kv,

your poem'I am knocking..'

yes it is a good one!,

I like it,


Stephen
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Review of Words  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear TC,


your poem'words'

u r correct!



Stephen
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Review of Sand  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear T C,


your'Sand'

it is a simple & good poem,

but looks like rather a prose,


good work,


Stephen
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Review of Firelight  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear S,


your poem 'firelight'


it looks rather a prose than a poem?

but the fire is very well described!

I like it

Stephen
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Review of We must remember  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear Thomas,

yr poem 'we must remember'


yes, we must remember the fallen heroes!

it is a good poem



Stephen
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Review of First Time  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (3.5)
dear J S,

your poem 'first time'

it looks like a real experience!

simply written

but really nice.


Stephen
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Review of Slipping The Hand  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
dear KF,

your poem 'slipping the hand'

it is a strange poem but I like it


good work


Stephen
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Review of Those eyes!  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Saloni,

Yr prose 'those eyes'

it is a nice piece!


thx,


Stephen
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Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Dear Boompenguins,

Yr poem 'paranoia'

is it from yr real experiences?

a very short prose rather than a poem

but a good one


thx,


Stephen
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Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Mary Ann,

Yr poem'Crocus'

it is a small but a good poem,


what is the name of the flower u mean?

thank u,


Stephen
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Review of Different Views  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear Jeff,

Yr poem'different views'

it is a good one,

I think our paths, we shall have to choose.


thx,

Stephen
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Review of Slither  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Dear TW,

Yr poem 'Slither'

I really like the line

'My only escape the words on a page.'


thanks



Stephen
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Review of The Blur  Open in new Window.
Review by stephen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
it is a small but a good poem
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