I would understand I love this poem and I love the way you wrote it and i love your spelling and grammar.but I like the way I found this on a random review and I love it, well I guess that is all I have to say fro right now review you later.and keep on writing.
I have to agree that we are all gods tools and he uses us too.I found this on a random review and wanted to thank you for writing this poem you have really made my day shine well thank you and your poem is great Well, bye
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Okay I found this on a random review page and want to first than writting.com for making a random review page and two the writer for writing this wonderful story. The spelling and grammar are correct and I think that this story is ready to roll, bye
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I love this I love this and I love this I can't believe someone would have thought about this and actually wrote it.Well, your poem is great and everything in it too.well, gotta go have a nice week
~From: Pheonix123465
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Well, I can see this is a personal piece an I like that I haven't really read a personal piece in a while and found myself really enjoying this.I found this on a random review and wanted to say that I couldn't wait to read this and find out what it was well, i gotta go bye
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I found this on a random review and had one thing I would like to tell you about in your poem. Well here is my suggestion please don't block me when I say this but I think that you shouldn't use question marks at almost the end of every line it kinda gets repetitive bye.
Hi, I would like to ask you a question. Can you please write a version of this in English I would love to read it and i hope you understand, but um mm since I can't read it I can't give an accurate review Thank you for reading this and i hope you have a good week.
~From: Pheonix123465
I would like to say a few words about this poem.I found this on a random review and wanted to say that this is the kind of poems that would make people want to read these poems over and over again. I also wanted to say that my favorite line in the poem would have to be:Thank you Lord for I am found.
Okay I found this poem on a random review and wanted to say that this poem made my day. I liked the part where you wrote "You should never sin Lesson learned." because it is so true and i love the rest of the poem keep on writing bye,
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This story was enchanting, amazing, and correctly defying awesomeness I would read this story all the live long day if i could but i gotta do stuff and work so yeah i can't well i love your story thank you for writting it bye.
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I found this on a random review and I thought that this poem was to die for(not really just because it was so poisonously good it makes me want to write so much.)Well, thank you for reading this review and not blocking me. Thank-you and bye. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
Um mm, can you write this in an English version so me and many others can read and review it. I appreciate you reading and maybe taking concern about what I have written please don't block and think of this as an helpful opinion and I wish you the best of luck good-bye.
Hey I just wanted to say what stuck out to me was mostly the very first line of the poem and how it went like
"The night turns to morning and we are lying entwined
Two bodies, two souls becoming combined
Merging together no beginning or end
Wishing that time would somehow suspend
Neither of us moving for it may break the spell
Feeling emotions as they begin to swell" and i also think that the rest of your poem is awesome bye.
Here is my personal opinion it is a great poem you have a great rhyme scheme and everything.I especially liked when you said"Somehow this Maya continues controlling me, Though I know well it is nought but illusory."the only problem with that sentence is the word nought should be written naught ( well, if it is the naught i am thinking of).Well, what I liked in that sentence is how much detail you put into that part of the poem.What else i liked about this poem is that your rhyme scheme is simple they all rhyme.Thank you for taking your time and reading this review bye.
(just a reminder, do not be offended by anything that I say because it is just a review, okay here we go.)Hi I found this on a random review because i thought i needed to review More and more each day I also think that this poem is a romantic piece and that it doesn't need any work done to it.Well, ta,ta
~From: Pheonix123465
You know what I see a story coming on caution(please do not be offensive in any way when i write these reviews i am only giving my opinion about them and would love if you didn't block me, thanks)I like how you uniquely put your chapter summeries and not just writing the whole it is like a table of content, Well, Bye
~From: Pheonix123465
This story was encouraging me to write more and more, I have to say that this random review was worth it. You have a great story and i hope everyone that reads this knows it,because they should.And I also like that you have good writing skills that you show in this piece of writing.Well, Bye
~From: Pheonix123465
I like everything about it the drama the action and of course the reason of the story was about a substance in a prism who doesn't like that I have one question though: Can you send me the rest of the book?Well, bye
~this review was because this story was awesome do not block or ban this user for anything he or she says, it was either a typo or just an opinion.
WOW I LOVE THAT FORMAT, no wonder why you won you are such a good poet you can write a poem a day no sweat Well, I found this on a page and wanted to read it so much that right when I saw it I read it (which was just now)Well, bye
~From: Pheonix123465
You know what I think that this poem should get a shout out and I think that you deserve it to this poem is unique and original at the same time
the formate: original
the theme : unique
well, bye.
~From Pheonix123465 review you later
I love the picture you put as the example it looks just like the description in the poem, and i love how you made it so descriptive with" a huge Shirley temple bow" or"she sits, legs crossed,on a damask ottoman,the genetic duplicate of her mother;"Well, Bye
~From: Pheonix123465
Hi, I found this on a random review and wanted to read and review it for you. You know what I love about this story, it is just the kinds of stories i love to read, write, review, and cherish. You will be the story review of the day for me because I think everything is perfect in this story well, bye
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Oh no i hate standing in the cold hard rain it would just suck having to do that. well, I found this on a random review and wanted to say that this poem made my day, well gotta run I am out looking for the sun(it is raining here too)
~From: Pheonix123465.
Okay, first thing is first
Hi, I found this story on a random review and i have to say that this is one of the most amazing stories i have ever read.I love the drama and the intensity it was so cool. well, I have to go bye
~From: Pheonix123465
You know what I can't wait to post this poem on the news feed ok I found this on a random review and I just wanted to say that this is a good poem and wanted to tell you to write more and review more. Well, by
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(not really just because it was so poisonously good it makes me want to write so much.)Well, thank you for reading this review and not blocking me. Thank-you and bye. ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** 
Well, I found this on a page and wanted to read it so much that right when I saw it I read it (which was just now)Well, bye
review you later