Good job, Scooter. In the interest of following reviewing rules I will include a few suggestions:
First of all, start paying attention to spelling and grammar--this will allow your writing to offer more options for what you can say and how you can say it.
Second, in regard to the overall theme of the piece, you certainly have a knack for getting across to your reader what it is that you're feeling. Careful, though, all the hellish imagery (the Reaper, flames, etc.) might lead someone to misinterpret this as a satanic kind of poem and not one about personal demons haunting you.
Great job, though!
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