Where is the rest...? I simply loved your opening so much ! The speed is good, there is an element where you expect something will happen, I love it but I now I want more!
this is a very well writtten beautiful piece, I would love to read more. It gives insight into the world of a 12 year old and it's almost as if I was looking over your shoulders and saw it happen.
It is very good!
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