Very nicely written, I enjoyed reading it. I am no expert but I write what strikes me and appreciate what is good read, this WAS one! Keep writing!
Cheers :)
Wonderfully written poem. I really enjoyed reading it. It was as if reading a short story yet it was a very keenly written poem. Thanks for sharing it. Keep writing!
Cheers!
Another amazing poem. . . Very nice and sweet . I enjoyed reding it, the third verse is my favourite. Keep writing. I will try to stop by again and read more of your poems:)
Cheers!
Very nice. I enjoyed reading it, the theme and the message is so realistic. This is what most of us really are but no one gets to know real US. Keep writing!
Very nice poem. Sky is one of the most amazing things that add beauty to the world, always changing, never the same. This poem is just about one of those changes. Keep writing.
Hi,
I have read all the stories displayed in your last newsletter. They were all very nice, this one is my favourite. The one about the mirrors and an uninvited hat were scary. I guess that's why I don't read horror stories much, they SCARE me:) .
Take care
Wow!really held my attention till the end.Good work.
I have also written couple of stories that I didn't post here because I thought they should be longer.Your work is quite inspiring(its short till effective).may be I will post one of mine in a couple of days or weeks:D.
Best of luck and keep up the good work.
the writing style is good.story sounds good as well.why haven't you written more of it?i'd like to read more:)i bet there is something more tragic coming up,a bit more tragedy will sure work for this story.All the best
p.s.please excuse me if there are any grammatical mistakes in my reviewing.English comes at the fourth position in the list of the languages i speak:)
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