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Review of The Pain of Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Aww....
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Review by Nicki Heart Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Super good. Keep writing stuff like this.

"If practice makes perfect, and nobody's perfect, why practice? Becuase it makes like a lot harder for everyone else."
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Review of Dreams  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I lost my father when I was quite young, and you got the emotions perfect. I would fix some of the grammar errors, and change some words, then it would earn you the 5.0 :)
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Review of entrapment  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
Add more. How does he/she (you didn't specify) get out? Caplitalize and use your puncuation, that will always get the extra bonus points you need. Have fun with it, though!
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Review of The Prey/Hunter  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I would give it a 4.0, but in the last line, you say the same thing two diffrent ways. It should be the the hunted becomes the hunter, and the killer becomes the killed.
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Review by Nicki Heart Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
It's alright. Not the best of poems. Keep writing.
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Review of Longing for You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Aww! It's SO SWEET!!!!!! I love it...
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Review of Mother's Birthday  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Awsome poem. *Smile*
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Review of Inspiration  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
It's a great poem, but correct your grammar. Be proud!
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