Nicely done. Your rhymes were consistent, and this was very easy to read. It was also very descriptive, I could see the snow melting and spring popping into existence. You used powerful words, which I really liked. Awesome job :)
WOW. That was a great beginning, I can't wait for more. Your words were very descriptive and I really liked it. You could really imagine where the character was, and what it was like. I am truly enthralled by your story.
I think you have a wonderful sense of words. This story was very adventurous and I wanted to keep reading it. I would be very happy to read more of your stories if they were as good as this one. you are truly an author. Great Job. :)
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