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Critique of dialogue, character, and grammar/spelling.
Favorite Genres
Young adult, general contemporary fiction, LGBT+ fiction
Least Favorite Genres
Erotica (I will NOT review pure smut; though there is a time and place for this writing, I do not feel comfortable critiquing it.)
Favorite Item Types
Short stories, novellas/novels (though I read those in snippets)
I will not review...
Pieces with gratuitous amounts of sex or gore, though mature themes are welcome. (I use the 13+ rating loosely.) I will most likely not read and review full novels all at once.
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Review of Feeling Stagnant  Open in new Window.
Review by Madison Leigh Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Aah! This was so cute and funny. Though the concept itself seems average on the surface, you've truly made this piece into something special. 😊

You can truly feel the love between Dan and Bobby in their interactions. It's clear that Bobby really cares about his husband and wants him to feel better, even if he comes off as a little bit overbearing in the process. You let us know this by the little details (the coffee, the way he tries to convince him with different, clichéd romantic scenarios, etc.)

The ending seemed slightly rushed, but the banter at the end made me smile.

All in all, I enjoyed this piece very much. Good work, and always keep writing!
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