Wow. I have to say that this song you've written is like what you wrote above, "a haunting melody". I don't know how you envisioned the music but the words danced along gracefully and beautifully with a guitar playing in my mind. I love how simple and powerful your song is. It really is a work of art in my opinion. Bravo! And I hope you continue to keep writing! :D
I love this story, and how much detail and care you give to each of the characters. I am excited to read the next chapter. And the Ean character, I wonder, is he an actual person or just some one you made up specifically for this story? And Erin, I unfortunately had a friend who was in her situation. She's beautifully written.
Amazing, phennomenal writing. I loved it and you've definitely have the flair for writing that Stephen King, Peter Straub and John Grissom do. Your description of the events and the people were fantastic. I really enjoyed reading this story and am glad there is a second one I can sink my teeth into. Whatever you do, keep writing! Your work is amazing. Anyways, Keep up the good work.
Sarah
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