I've read throug this story several times before, and I like the concept. It gives you a lot of freedom to write and have your own unique situations. I would personally love to make a story in this interactive, but I have no time. I wish you continued luck in your efforts in expanding this story.
This story is quite interesting. It has a nice main idea and topic, and it's very creative. There is a lot of potntial in each line of the story and could be greatly expanded. If you haven't recently, I encourage you to add more chapters of your own writing to encourgae others. Keep up your good work and keep moving forward!
That was awsome! A great follow up to part two and just as descriptive as the other parts. You did well to develope the plot more and it made the story even more enjoyable. Another great piece of work. You did a great job giving each character the traits and attitudes they have in there show. You even manage to keep the story witty and make a unique way to explain how Lauren Faust made the show. That was well thought out and I thought it was very clever! Can't wait for part 4 and when it's done please give me the link!
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