Hi Thaddeus...I love your name! I have an uncle named Thaddeus:} That being said..i really enjoyed your work. It struck a cord within me as i have been reminiscing today about my childhood and my life as an adult. Your piece was well written and thought provoking...something to be proud of.
i really like what you have going here...I just kinda stumbled upon your story and started reading, not expecting to read more than a paragraph because i had already sifted through maybe 5 other works and nothing had caught my interest. It seemed to jumble up some at the end there...when you started writing about the drunken father..maybe i was reading to fast but, things got a little blurry for me. anyway..once again..you have talent and i like this story line. seems like you can do a lot with this..good luck!
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