Hi :)
I was encouraged to read because you said it was based on the feeling you had in the low point of your life.
Lately I have been like I'm in the bottom part of life's wheel. It feels bad and no one seems to understand.
Reading your poem, I could relate to most part. I am not an expert at poetry but I also write some poems here. I'm just gonna say that I could relate to your writing, and that you have delivered the message so well. Keep writing!
It is very touching. Romance and sadness blend into one beautiful story.
I'm a newbie and please bear with this review of mine, which is short and not as great as other reviews... ^^v
keep on writing!
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