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Review of HATE  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
In my opinion this poem is hurtful. I feel the pain. How hard it must have been for this person to go through these feelings.

I will say the grammar needs to be looked at.

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Review of Wasted years  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
Boy can I relate to this writing. I like the poem and the story. I did have a hard time following it at times as it doesn't flow well. Over all it explains well the drink and it's harsh effects on everyone.



Thanks.


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Review of Reminiscing  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
WOW. What a unique wonderfully written poem. I wsa able to follow it well and could picture each scenerio in my mind.

Great job.



Kim
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Review of Mr Fall  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Good job. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Short and to the point.

Good luck!


Kim
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Review of Love's Token  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Nice poem. I love the story. For me a beginning, middle and end make fo ra great read. You've done that in this poem.

I did find it didn't flow well at times but over all I really enjoyed it.


Possibilities,

Kim
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