I happen to come across your work while I was searching for something to read.
The title of your poem attracted me, I was curious to know what wall are you describing about. Good title selection.
Initially from mere title I had thought of this work about something that hinders you, something that stops you from moving forward.( I didn't read the description though)
As I began reading the poem, I began yo get the real meaning of it. In the Vietnam war a lot was lost from both the sides and the suffering, the pains are too much to bear.
You did a great job in describing the miserable pain that was felt by the families who lost everything in the war.
There is hardly anything wrong with it that I would point out its superb and I truly find it worth appreciating from the bottom of my heart.
Its definitely one of the finest and best works that I've read on WdC.
A great work of words I must say.
Though what really made me curious to study your work was your title. Its makes readers curious about what's inside.
Eventually I found that you did wrote it merely by seeing a picture. And I must say your words did describe every detail greatly. There's hardly any flaw that I should point out.
Great work.
Keep writing and keep smiling.
Units really hard to find such better literature and you really are a great writer.
The words, the feeling were so touching that it made me emotional while reading it. (& let me tell you my eyes have been wet only once while reading).
Really brilliant and wonderful work.
Keep writing.
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