Prince's (princecaspian) Reviews

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#3403226

Review of Our Lives

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

yea u cant have gd without bad, otherwise u dont appreciate tha good, goood poem keep writing.

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#3187001

Review of Call of the Wild

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Beautiful words.
This was a very good poem to go witha very good story.
Some of it i didn't understand but i'm tired and don't feel like thinking.
am i right in believing you put a lot of effort in this, 'cause it shines through with melodic resonance.

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#3154372

Review of The Sad, Sad Day

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Very powerful, Simple but powerful, good use of words to create Raw emotion, i also like the double spacing.
Is this a true story or one you made up?

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#3143160

Review of Free

Review by Prince

Rated: 18+

| (4.0)

This is also a good poem, although
' fell through the door,
But you locked the vault.'
These too lines don't really make sence to me, it seems that you chose the word vault specefically so it rhymes. Vault may make sence, but it gave the immpression that you could'nt find the right words.
Other than that each verse was fantastic, it captured the emotion, and i got the picture.
Well done mate.

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#3143117

Review of To Touch The Sun

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Rated: E

| (4.5)

Great poem, i will take every word to heart.... Each line rung true.......

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#3143106

Review of Song of Healing

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

Very good idea, needs some work though. I like the names you picked for your characters. Keep writing this was a very good piece, but i couldn't help to feel i was missing out on the bigger picture, is this fom a larger story or somethin? Although this was excellantly descripted it still needs some work on grammer which i hate probably as much as you do, but it has to be done!! Other than that keep writing and have fun!!

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#3143094

Review of The Passage to My Heart

Review by Prince

Rated: E

| (4.0)

I'd liike to hear this in a song... What instrument do you play or do you just sing?
Where did you get the inspiration for this song?

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#3139108

Review of My Fairytale

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Rated: ASR

| (4.0)

I like this poem, so i read it twice. I don't know if this was at all intended by you but it told me you have to look beyond the pretence of beauty and perfectionism, into what is real and true. The world isn't perfect and it will never be. The words that were used painted a beautiful picture, 'Fairies flit between the soft clouds'

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#3135414

Review of Apocrypha

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Rated: E

| (4.0)

This poem is easilly better than the other two. Just because the other dude put his poem in the shape of a Whale Tale. This poem was Fantastic.
This poem made me think a bit more about the sea and the qoute, two thumbs up.

>Prince