The thought you put into it was really good! The fact that you said you and I love you so many times was a little cleshay! Should have use more descriptive meaningful words! Other than that you have talent and i can see that!!
This was amazing. I like the way it was structured! I actually felt like I was feeling what you were feeling. I felt you,pain,your,sorrow, i felt everything you were feeling! I could underdstand what you were goin through. I understood you!! Well i should say understand you!!!
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